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PostSubject: Kabutomaru    Fri Apr 06, 2012 11:11 pm

First sprite, didn't use any other sprite. Please go easy on me.


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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:40 am

The outline of how he is set out is good, but it's really rough, make the cloak longer because you don't usually see kabutomaru's feet. Fix up his snake to be a bit thicker and change it's position a little bit. Good effort ^^ keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:49 am

I agree with Game and Watch also have like a black outline and try and not make it too rough and blocky.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 7:02 am

BUT!! Since you started from scratch, I think that makes it a pretty good effort ^^.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 10:15 am

I agree too the face is kinda.. O.O.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:09 pm

Agree with both of u and is it just me or kabuto's 1 feet is bigger then other o_O
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 4:22 pm

I think the head of the cloak makes the head bigger.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:20 pm

Lol,
@Sasuke, it's larger because of his stance.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:31 pm

Well it's still good for a beginner.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:43 pm

well not bad! good one.. but i seems he haves his INVISIBLE buddy on his left.. 6/10

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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:48 pm

Invisible buddy?
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:49 pm

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Invisible buddy?

Yeah what was that Reaper?

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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:51 pm

Does he mean the white background on the right?
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:56 pm

nah.. its his stance.. like he's putting his hand on his INVISIBLE friends shoulder..


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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:57 pm

Well that's the new stance from Naruto Generations.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 5:58 pm

i think its a lil weird..

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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:00 pm

I think he does that so the snake can rest on his hand.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 6:43 pm

-|Mark975|- wrote:
I think he does that so the snake can rest on his hand.

Exactly.

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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 8:26 pm

Whoo I got it right lol.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 07, 2012 9:45 pm

Rhino.Freak wrote:
nah.. its his stance.. like he's putting his hand on his INVISIBLE friends shoulder..

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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sun Apr 08, 2012 4:24 am

If the arm isn't going out too far and goes to the right abit then it should look better.
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PostSubject: Re: Kabutomaru    Sat Apr 14, 2012 11:48 pm

~Bump-
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Made cloak longer, fixed the hand and made the snake thinner.

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