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PostSubject: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sat Jul 14, 2012 11:59 pm

Here is Rin Okumura in normal mode:
Here is Rin Okumura in demon mode [Only two flames, the sword looks bad]:
And here is Rin Okumura in demon mode [More flames]:
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:49 am

Not bad for first time Wink
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:16 am

@ Sasuke
Thanks, tho it really took time to create, also I am thinking of animating it.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 7:40 am

Looks good! Go ahead and animate it Razz, what anime is this from?
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 8:51 am

c'mon man, complete it, you could do better than that even if this is your first time.
open it if you like to hear my opinion
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just think 'bout it Razz
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 11:21 am

@GW
Ao No Exorcist.
@Chikido
I will try my best tho.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:03 pm

Don't know if you will count as a second post but here is Rin Okumuraa bit ''improved?'':
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:07 pm

Yeah you should of edited your previous post but his shoes need some working.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:11 pm

I will keep that in mind, working on the shoes~
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:15 pm

yeah, you could double post in your topic, it's called a ~BUMP Razz
yep, i like the new version, he seems more ok
btw, shading is not just linear, try to make clothes folding, make him more real!!
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:18 pm

I AM NOT THAT good in English, so do tell me about folding lol. [I am a n00b I know.]
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:25 pm

(im not good in english too, try to understand these Razz)
it mean you make those clothes more real..look at some sprites, learn from tut...ect and ya will know them =.="
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:27 pm

Lol, ok. victory
I am working with Normal Rin atm, so when the Normal Rin looks good, I will work with the demons.



~Edited

[Well I minimized the resolution a bit so here it is [I believe that I am bad at shading]:
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:49 pm

Good i like it
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 12:49 pm

Thank you Sasuke.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:00 pm

But he's head is not good
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:02 pm

What is wrong with his head?
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:26 pm

Yeah looks better.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:31 pm

no one could "good" on their first time...this one is alot better than my first work Very Happy
keep that spirit man, one day you will be our spriter Very Happy (just may be Razz)
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 1:37 pm

His arms are bit too skinny.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:10 pm

You people sure don't go easy on the newbies. r r...
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:11 pm

Were giving you tips to help make your sprite better.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:13 pm

Kay, kay. Making the arms fatter. Both arms right?
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:15 pm

Just the left arm.
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PostSubject: Re: My first time spriting. Took me a long time to do it.   Sun Jul 15, 2012 2:17 pm

Kay, here it is:
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