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 Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)

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Menma [cloaked] should have
Mini rasengan
38%
 38% [ 6 ]
Mini rasenshurinken
62%
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PostSubject: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 1:15 am

I actually changed the whole thing about this post. so my character is Menma from Naruto The Movie: Road to Ninja. And I will poste my progress in here. Hope you guys enjoy it.




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Standing:
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Walking:
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Running:
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Teleporting:
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Jumping:
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 6:18 am

Hair and head need some work, neck looks...., the abs should be just lines, legs and arms are overall good, feet need some fixing, shading looks alright.

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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 6:28 am

^ Mark said it all Razz 7/10 for me too
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:12 am

the hair is meh...you should fix it, the head position isnt good, and legs' stance is abit strange, +shading even more man Very Happy
i wont rate this until you make it awesome =]]~
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 7:38 am

Nothing left for me to say
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:27 pm

8/10 looks better than your previous ones

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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sat Aug 11, 2012 5:54 pm

Thanks guys, I'll try my best on improving it. Forever Alone
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Wed Aug 15, 2012 8:29 pm

Here, Menma being hidden. Also in gif. [And yes this is from the same sprite]:
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Wed Aug 15, 2012 10:00 pm

great animation, fluid stance

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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Thu Aug 16, 2012 11:53 am

Yeah nice work.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:20 am

@Rhino Thanks, the stance is suitable for this form of Menma.

@Mark Thanks tutor, learned it all from you.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:50 am

Here is Menma from both sides:
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:58 pm

Haha cool.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:39 pm

OK SO HERE IS AN UPDATE:
I improved the sickle to make it look not so plain.
Also here is Menmas stance facing right:
Menma facing left:
Menma walking to the right:
Menma walking to the left:
Menmas teleportation [both sides]:
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Wed Aug 29, 2012 2:40 pm

Pretty good but on the walking animation theres a random white dot that goes and then disappears you should fix that.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Thu Aug 30, 2012 1:23 am

Yeah, I'm working on that right now.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Thu Aug 30, 2012 12:33 pm

Okay good.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Thu Aug 30, 2012 9:43 pm

Since noone created a menma oficial sprite, so I will give him custom attacks.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Fri Aug 31, 2012 1:20 pm

Okay cant wait.
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:05 pm

Since the progress is slow due to school and such, I will try and complete menma as soon as possible. Putting all my strenght into it. So here he is in running mode [I will add the cape and the weapon later] :
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:23 pm

Nice spriting, you've gotten alot better, also did you ask for permission to advertise you're project on this site?
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sun Sep 09, 2012 10:25 pm

It's okay Angat, we allow him to do that.
We don't care if other will advertise their projects here.

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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sun Sep 09, 2012 11:11 pm

Noone told me about it. Then I will stop advertising my work lol I\'m sorry
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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Sun Sep 09, 2012 11:29 pm

You can freely advertise your work here and I like your sprites. Very Happy

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PostSubject: Re: Menma (Naruto Road To Ninja)   Mon Sep 10, 2012 12:33 am

Soraru wrote:
Noone told me about it. Then I will stop advertising my work lol

Ω G man wrote:
It's okay Angat, we allow him to do that.
We don't care if other will advertise their projects here.


Hmm...
You can advertise your work here, it's okay.

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